Hi Royce. Thank you for the amazing write up! This type of help will greatly assist in my making vast improvements to the clinic!
Others reading this, I would greatly appreciate this type of feedback if you've been enjoying my script.
I'm almost done with the next version (4.3) which has a bunch of new additions as well as fixes/improvements. It will require a pretty good amount of testing before I'll release it, look for it in the next couple of weeks I hope. I also have a bunch planned for 4.4 as well.
On to some thinks I want to address from Royce.
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Well, I started doing this on Saturday and it's been . . . interesting.
Earlier that day I'd played a line writing script and I had to get out of the house to go to the bank, so I cheeted to end it early. When asked why I was there, I admitted to that and it was a long painful day. I did get it all taken care of that one day, though.
Hmmm, I think I need to work on clarifying what the offense levels mean within the script. Cheating was more intended for cheating in life, cheating on your gf/bf, cheating on a test, cheating at cards, cheating your way out of a punishment, etc. I do think that sort of behavior deserves to be classified as a serious offense, but cheating at a script in order to finish earlier might be more of a medium offense in my book. Anyone else have thoughts on this?
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Which is lucky, because the next morning, I found that I'd neglected to do something the night before and looking at the list of offences, I decided that Laziness is a generic badness of not doing something while Naughtiness is generic badness of doing something. So I admitted to being lazy. And later I found I had to do it again. Again, painful. Also, sweaty. After the first time, my disciplinarian stated that she was a sweaty mess. SHE was? I took three showers that day.
Kind of the same comment here, laziness as a serious offense was more intended for "I've been lazy for the last few weeks and neglecting a lot of chores, therefore I need a serious butt whipping to get back in gear."
I think forgetting to do something is maybe more on the light offense side. I'll fix this in the upcomming release. Doesn't help your poor butt now, I'm impressed that you are sticking with it after those two punishments!
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Monday, I put off doing something minor and admitted to procrastination.
All to say, I'm glad I'm not admitting to any badness today. I had a momentary of lack of attention and forgot to complete a task, but it I don't think it comes to the level of yet another beating. At least I hope it doesn't. Maybe it does. I'm unsure. I think that's part of the experience. Suffice it to say, I dread the day I do something wrong at work and have to figure out what to confess to. I'm planning on hanging out with this until my birthday event at the least.
Just curious, how far off is your birthday? Please don't miss it! The birthday spanking is pretty good, the missed birthday spanking is something you don't want to contend with!
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In general, it's really good. I like the built-in breaks and the images for OTK are inspired There are a few points where I was confused and though I was sopposed to stand in the corner when I was really supposed to pose for a spanking. I would not fix that. I little anxiety, as I mentioned before, is good for this sort of thing. If I were going to change something, there's a couple of place where "your" and "you're" are switched and it's weird having to rub my backside while the "computer watches" and have to watch the computer as well.
4.3 will have a ton of grammar/spelling fixes. You are right about the computer watching, I think some people can put themselves in the headspace where they imagine there is a real mistress in the room with them, but others (including myself) struggle with that. I think if I just give instructions for the lotion rubbing it might be better.
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The lobby is brilliant. Well-scripted. The pictures are well-chosen. I find myself. kneeling for it and I think that's appropriate. And I've got to admit, I've never really wanted to suck someone's boot-heel before. I get it now.
Thanks! There are some really good easter eggs with the lobby as well if you ever come across them
Also, more fun with the lobby is planned for future releases.
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Anyway, that is my rambling compliment. If you're still looking for offensses, I'd suggest messing something mjor up at work. If the issue spread out of your department or immediate circle.
Great suggestion, I'll add some work related offenses similar to the school offenses.