2 pictures are missing in Peach : 14...closeup and 22

Anyway, I'm a fan of this style - I hope to see more of this sort of scripts !

oh derp. I was out for a while. Updated and finished it. Should have all images now and less typo's.
Grammar... Well. The source material was written badly. And English is not my first language so I hope it's not too bad.

Hi - English is very much my first language, and I'm very good with spelling, grammar and just "getting it right".

If there's anything you want help with, please just ask.

As the script is quite well coded, you may simply download the Peach script and open it with Notepad or SexScript, correct spelling mistakes, etc., and republish it or send the .groovy file back to 0385 ?