Hello again,
I got a few notes for improvement on your script. First of all, It would be nice to have a random generator which will include more task then 1. It also gives the wrong code for the wedgies. instead you'll be edging. This could improve the Master and eventual solo-play untill a slave finds a real Master. The Blackmail part doesn't seem to work properly. I tried it out with my own E-mail-accounts but nothing happens. You had to fill in a list with toys you have in the beginning, yet it doesn't seem to interract with the program. Perhaps there's something in there? Same goes for the clothing section. A Slave can have more punishments then just cornertime or cumdenial. Perhaps self-spanking could be added? The Manual/readme file isn't clear enough. I let the file read to multiple people after explaining and showing the Sex Script site. Perhaps you can be a bit more detailed on this. Whenever you;re doing this program Solo, even though it's not ment to be, there's nowhere you can fill in any reportcodes. Perhaps this feature could be added. Again, this could improve solo-play greatly. I filled in some of the Cum-reports, but there seems nothing to be done with it. The system doesn't take control over the user, except when you're doing the Anal-program, in which he only looks at the time, and if you failed, tells you to get a punishment code. Perhaps more can do done with that too? That is all for now. I hope this can be usefull.
Slave Bucket
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